Untitled, (song I'm currently writing) needs work

[macdougal]

I test myself
With thoughts of why
I tell my mind
Trust No one but the man within

Seen that nightmare place
A thousand times
I quake inside
And cry myself to sleep with fear

How you could be
So cruel as to
Play with my life
Is something that I'll never know

You saved yourself
From heart ache row
But shot me down
And killed the man that used to be

I often think
About how and why
Whats in your head?
A warped mind almost got the best of me

So now I sit
With anxious thoughts
I hear car doors
And think that they are coming to take me

[RFLH]

I think that everyone can echo those words. I like it.

[friday]

the last two lines are so powerful.