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    As I gaze upon the moon
    my feet taps to the tune
    dried food left on the spoon
    in a heartbeat its over to soon

    G.B

  • #2
    How many?

    How many poems are we allowed to post on this site
    Because I can carry on from day to night
    Although I'm trying to stop with all my might
    My fingers on the keyboard are in a fight
    But I must stop because its getting light.
    Aaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrggggg think I'm losing my sight.

    G.B

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    • #3
      Beautiful lol I will have a pint of what your having

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      • #4
        Gone

        I have been raped from the inside out
        No one listens even though I shout
        What have a done to deserve this fate
        All I wanted was a partner and a mate
        Don't leave me here all alone
        All you have to do is pick up the phone
        Just tell the truth its never too late
        Or are you now just too full of hate
        You have took away all that I am
        Just because you know you can
        And now I'm just an empty shell
        Do I really deserve to be in this hell?


        G.B

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        • #5
          This poem has really touched me GB thanks for sharing it

          Welshgirl x

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          • #6
            A pint it shall be haha

            Thanks WG,

            I want a pint of what i have been having too . But thanks the last poem is really for everyone so it can relate to the accused to the victim. I hope it can be read that way.

            Regards,

            Ghost....B

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            • #7
              It certainly touched me...so it can be read either way. No easy feat there!

              WG x

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              • #8
                Night

                The light is fading fast
                I can barely see the green on the grass
                My emotions are raw
                I don't have thoughts anymore
                I'm like a child crying in the night
                I see their shadows I cannot fight
                I close my mouth I close my eyes
                I hear them breathe I hear them sigh
                I feel their flesh I feel my pain
                I hear the door shut and their gone again
                I open my mouth I open my eyes
                The night has come to a pass
                Now I can see the green of the grass

                G.B
                Last edited by Casehardened; 29 September 2013, 03:23 PM. Reason: at request of OP

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                • #9
                  Wow.....so emotive. You should take up writing I feel, it is certainly a talent you possess

                  Welshgirl x

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                  • #10
                    Hi WG,

                    Thanks for your comments speechless now. I have read some others on here who would put my writing in like infant school haha.

                    Regards,

                    Ghost....B

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                    • #11
                      Bottle

                      I unscrew the lid
                      From the bottle I hid
                      Anticipating my sips
                      I lick my lips
                      I'm not in control this is my master
                      I hear his laughter
                      I am his muse
                      My body to abuse
                      Wine surging through my veins
                      Like a current through the mains
                      I won't drink tomorrow
                      But tonight he's getting me through my sorrow
                      He is my best friend
                      He helps me to mend
                      But one day I know
                      I wont feel this low
                      I will be in my bed
                      I will be dead
                      Nothing to gain
                      No more pain
                      Nothing in my head
                      Emotionally bled
                      It's time to stop
                      Before I rot

                      G.B
                      Last edited by Ghost biscuit; 27 September 2013, 12:27 PM.

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                      • #12
                        Wow.......yet another amazing poem Ghost Biscuit. I can really identify with this one too

                        Regards

                        Welshgirl

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                        • #13
                          Hi WG,

                          Thanks. Hope your ok today.

                          Regards,

                          Ghost....B

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                          • #14
                            Your poems are amazing GB! I'd like a pint of whatever it is too, please!

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                            • #15
                              Hi,
                              Thanks for saying that wasny sure about
                              Putting anyup but thanks. Oh should of included the
                              E on breath silly me. Can I include this somehow?
                              Well I put more up if thats ok.

                              Regards,

                              Ghost... B

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