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    I long to see our daughter
    To find out whats gone wrong
    I've walked the path beside her
    The path which was so long.

    I was there when they discovered
    The tumour in her head
    The one who helped her realise
    She'd be alive and not yet dead.
    It was possible to fix her
    The surgeon that day said
    She would live to see her daughter
    After the op and a time in bed.
    It has taken time to grow strong again
    To realise your complete again and whole
    The life you have stretches forward
    And again you can strive to your goal.

    But now I don't know if you are reakky well
    Because of this thing you have done
    Where has this memory come from
    To make you accuse this one.
    This is the one who always cherished you
    His one and only daughter
    The one who cried in a daze that day
    They took the tumour away.
    This is the one who wiped your tears
    And soothed you when you were ill
    The one who you call Father
    The one you put through the mill.

    I hope the man behind this
    Who now controls your mind
    The one you call your husband
    The one who isn't kind.
    Will be gone when police discover
    The lies he's put in your head
    I hope he's not too angry
    For I fear you maybe dead.

    I understand you have a weakness
    I know your easily lead
    Take a step back from the danger
    And ask for help instead.
    For once my darling daughter
    Think of others and not you
    The one your with is harming you
    And all the lies are too.

    Tell them that you know the truth
    Your father never did this
    You did confess not long ago
    To the other man you trust.
    Your on your own with this mistake
    You have no strength behind you
    I can not help to fix this
    Please Please think of what you do.
    Together We Can Beat This Hell

  • #2
    Sniffle!
    Thank you for sharing that LP.

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    • #3
      Ditto - very moving, tears in my eyes.

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      • #4
        So hurt and angry

        Wow ,you got me crying,that is beautiful, I hope she can see it xx

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        • #5
          Just beautiful - swallowing hard too -
          "Only love can light the mirror of your soul" - Chris de Burgh

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          • #6
            Thanks I am glad you all like my poem ...I too wish our daughter could see it. LP
            Together We Can Beat This Hell

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            • #7
              That is lovely and very well written

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              • #8
                Thank you Lusijay...Its a very relaxing pass time and a good way to put emotions across for me. LP
                Together We Can Beat This Hell

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